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She comes to me where it is always night—
A black form, flowing black cape;
And like the moon, her face is white,
A deadly blossom from the black scape.
Her whisper I hear, soft but austere.

Her lips blow boreal breaths of dreams,
Dark torrents, cataclysmic illusions,
A web of inky, sugary themes
Building an empire, forcing extrusions
That harden like ice behind my eyes.

She tips the hourglass to begin
(With glassy ice knives and mirrors as weapons)
The descent of fallacy from within
And as each silver sliver cut deepens,
I begin to see the masterpiece.

Then, with a smile, she fades away,
Her work done, leaving me solitary;
Her zephyr falls, bearing an array
Of starlight elucidating the airy
Frost that crept into my mind and slept.
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Author's Comments

Playing more with alliteration, assonance, and subtler rhyme schemes. The image of a Darkness Falls' Tooth Fairy-like woman triggered this piece.

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:icontransfixion:
Subtle and flows well. I really like it.

The tooth fairy's image is scary; the movie, not so great. Haha.
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i agree. the movie nearly put me to sleep, but the masked, dark image of the tooth fairy, as opposed to the traditional happy, sweet image is great. :)

--
There will be time, there will be time
To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
~T. S. Eliot
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Beautiful, beautiful poem
:icondead-poetess-society:
thanks!

--
There will be time, there will be time
To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet
~T. S. Eliot

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